Blog feedback, part 3

YASMIN AHMED

•Embed schedule 

•I like the animation progress screen shots, keep that up 

•You have posted a digipak but haven’t analysed it 

•Colours of text on blos and background make it hard to read 

•There are a lot of shot posts or unfinished e.g. Ed Sheeran and James Morrison

videos? 

•No really sure I see any improvement since my last feedback 

1.M – No evidence of independent research in music video e.g. only class analysis present on blog, need digipak analysis and poster analysis 

2.M – only a picture of a schedule 

3.B – Can’t remember if I saw an animatic – but also post the story board. Keep updating on the animation 

4.B/P – colour of text and background 

5.B-

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