ANYTHING BLUE IS HYPERLINKED TO THE SPECIFIC BLOGSPOST
Animatic-Beau
Looking at the animatic the cuts seem a little slow paced, and I think it could be feed up by adding in more shots e.g. more perspective on the shots that are long you could add in some close ups of his face. I know the song is slow paced but the cuts don’t even seem to be happening on a beat. In saying this and having spoken with you and Sarah I really like the concept.
Lesson 13
Don’t leave empty posts
In Your Arms- music video analysis Just the way you are- music video analysis Ed Sheeran music video analysis You give me something- analysis
I would consider these to be empty posts, as you have just embedded YouTube videos. Please perform some textual analysis incorporating Goodwin and explaining how these could influence your own music video. I would say that at this stage in the coursework all textual analysis should have been done as this is part of Research and Planning. You could do these as a voice over, download the video and record commentary/ analysis and then upload to your blog.
Pitch feedback
Please comment on what you got from this feedback, summarize the feedback and how you plan to input changes in your project due to this audience feedback – this shows that you have considered audience feedback and are able to adapt you work sue to this feedback.
Blog feedback- improvements to make, and add
Don’t leave empty posts
Blog feedback
You haven’t commented on the feedback you got from Leanne, this shows that you haven’t critically thought about your work or tried to make the improvements. Some things Leanne mentioned and still haven’t done
Relevant labelling of posts Your journal posts are still not reflective as opposed to narrative Go back over these posts and add context to them e.g. how has this
knowledge/research impacted the why in which you have thought about yourcoursework? Capitalism, creativity and the crisis in the music industry, Independent record labels in the uk (please don’t copy and paste) The Big Three, Major vs Independent record labels, Lesson 1- Adorno and Horkheimer's theory
Leanne also said to use screen shots for your analysis Coldplay; Paradise, music video analysis, Jay-Z; 99 Problems, Music video analysis
Audience profile- Beau
I wouldn’t agree with your psychographic and it doesn’t completely match your demographic. You said mostly female and then said mainly teenage boys and girls. Also I’m not sure the song you chose is can be considered ‘indie’ and appealing to those who ‘don’t follow the crowd’. This song you have chosen reminds me of Van Morrison and I would consider it to be Pop/Soul possibly for those teens who have grown up listening to what their parents have but want something with a modern edge, fans of this music appreciate it’s old school roots but also want a contemporary sound to it.
MISSING POSTS
Notes and review of album cover article – You should have read the article on album covers by now! Summarise what you have read and how what you have read can inform your planning
Analysis of Digipaks – written and virtual – I think Jack may have scanned some other covers
De-commodification – we read this article in class – what was it about – how are you going to fight de-commodification? You all admitted that you don’t but CDs let alone digipaks – SO HOW DO YOU PLAN TO ENCOURAGE YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE to buy your digipak?
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